Tone and voice
Tone
- Professional but conversational
- Positive but not over-stated
- Relaxed and friendly but not too familiar
Voice
- We keep language simple and clear
- We use short, focused sentences without undue embellishment
- We don't use nicknames, slang or emoticons
- We are clear and concise
- We don’t SHOUT at our reader
- We speak in the first (we, us, our/s) and second (you, your/yours) person
- We value and respect our reader – they are our focus
- Our language is ‘inclusive’ – avoiding biased or prejudicial terms
Plain language
We use plain language, which is
- Faster to read
- Easier to understand
- Preferred by a wide range of readers
Plain language uses:
- familiar, everyday words
- strong verbs in an active voice
- simple sentence framework, with shorter sentences
- headings, bullet points and other formatting techniques to make it easy to scan a document and find key information
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We aim to provide a teaching environment that inspires our students to succeed. | Our purpose is to provide a quality tertiary education experience that inspires our students to succeed. |
We care about our staff and students. | Federation University Australia is a people-focused institution |
To enter the program you must hold a degree or diploma. | Entry into the program requires that you have previously completed a Degree or Diploma. |
After completing this program you’ll have many career opportunities. | Completion of this program will provide you with a variety of career opportunities. |
Apply by 1 September. | Applications close 1 September. |