Writing and content
Words are your tools, so it’s important to choose them carefully. Your ideas can be complex and sophisticated, but your writing should express them simply.
Clearly written messages also show respect and consideration for your audience, which helps build better relationships. The following writing tools will help you do that.
Be reader-friendly
Connect with your audience directly by using words like ‘you’, ‘we’ and ‘I’, if that’s an appropriate tone for your message. Think of your written words as the start of a conversation.
Match your level of technical language to your audience. Academic staff will understand the meaning of some phrases and terms about curriculum or assessments, but students may not. If you have to use bureaucratic, technical or legal terms, include a definition or explanation.
Be clear
Using plain and clear language helps your audience read, understand and use the information you are giving them.
Tip: Where possible, choose a simple word or phrase over a complex one. Writing in short, simple words doesn’t mean you are ‘dumbing down’ the message. It means you are communicating your important and complex ideas as clearly and effectively as possible.
The principles of plain language include:
- structuring your message logically
- using headings, subheadings, lists and tables to help readers navigate through your material
- writing short, uncomplicated sentences and leaving out anything that isn’t necessary for your message
- choosing common, everyday words rather than jargon or technical terms
- only using acronyms when absolutely necessary and always defining them the first time they appear
- using white space, typography that is easy to read and visual tools.
Complex | Simple | Complex | Simple | |
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a large number of | many | in order that | for, so | |
advantageous | helpful | in regard to | about | |
ameliorate | improve | in the event that | if | |
commence | begin, start | inception | start | |
commensurate | equal | leverage | use | |
consolidate | combine, join, merge | optimise | perfect | |
constitutes | is, forms, makes up | pertaining to | about, of, on | |
construct | build | prescribed | required | |
deleterious | harmful | proficiencies | skills | |
disseminate | issue, send | proximity | near | |
due to the fact that | because | regarding | about | |
endeavour | try | subsequently | after or later | |
erroneous | wrong | successfully complete | complete, pass | |
expeditious | fast | sufficient | enough | |
facilitate | ease, help | utilise | use | |
implement | carry out | was of the opinion that | thought | |
in lieu of | instead | with the exception of | except for |
Using inclusive language shows courtesy and respect for diversity. Before identifying particular characteristics about people when you write, ask whether it is necessary and relevant to the discussion.
Tip: Avoid gendered pronouns: Avoid writing his/her, it is now acceptable to use ‘their’ even if the subject of your sentence is singular.
If it is necessary, then use words that emphasise people’s humanity, rather than focusing on their gender, race, cultural background, religion, age, sexual orientation, physical or intellectual ability or appearance.
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people with disabilities | disabled people |
first or given name | Christian name |
English as an additional language (EAL) or languages other than English (LOTE) | non-English speaking background (NESB) |
domestic partner | husband or wife |
police officer | policeman |
Write your answers in the booklet supplied. | The student should write his/her answers in the booklet supplied. |
Using the active voice means being clear about who (the ‘actor’) is doing what (the ‘action’). For example, ‘The ball was kicked’ is passive, as we don’t know who kicked the ball. ‘The teacher kicked the ball’ is active.
Writing in the active voice gives the reader more information, and it also adds accountability to your message.
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We made mistakes. | Mistakes were made. |
Federation residential students raised $500 towards a very worthy cause. | $500 was raised towards a very worthy cause. |
When the action is more important than the actor, the passive voice is appropriate. For example, ‘The new library will be opened in January’, is passive, but the important message is that the library will be opened, not who is opening it.
Where available, centralised content must be linked to rather than being duplicated or customised across the website.
This ensures that when the information is updated, users are directed to accurate content, rather than relying on information to be manually updated.
Key central content that should be linked to includes:
Program and course information - Link to Course Finder
Policies and procedures - Link to Policy Central
The style of writing is determined by the targeted audience.
Our website is a key marketing tool for the University and a rich information source for existing staff and students. Content should be written with the intended audience in mind. Our goal is to enable visitors to find information as effortlessly as possible.
- Marketing content should be presented in a positive, optimistic and friendly but not over-stated style. Refer to our Brand Standards (or Brand Book) for more information.
- Material for existing staff and students should be presented in short, focused sentences without undue embellishment.
- Write directly to your audience. It makes the content more personal and engaging.
Correct: We offer flexible and convenient ways for you to study, including part-time and online learning.
Incorrect: Federation University Australia offers flexible and convenient ways for students to study, including part-time and online learning.
The presentation of written text should be consistent across the website.
Web pages, files and text must follow standard conventions. This ensures that pages, menu items, browser titles, downloadable files and web content have meaningful and consistent names and presentation for the reader.
To meet this requirement, these conventions should be followed:
- Use whole words, except where abbreviations are universally understood
Correct: 'Union Collective Agreement' 'Mt Helen Campus map.doc'
Incorrect: 'UCA' 'mth_camp-2.doc' - Page titles and headings should be sentence case
Correct: 'Contact us' 'Written/text conventions'
Incorrect: 'Contact Us' 'Written/Text Conventions' - Upper case should not be used for words
Correct: 'Information sessions'
Incorrect: 'INFORMATION SESSIONS' - Bold or italics should be used for emphasis rather than underlines
'Bold' or 'italics' should be used for word/phrase emphasis rather than 'underlines'. - Font faces, colours or sizes must not be specified in the HTML code
Select options in the WYSIWYG editor to ensure the standard text presentation is not over-written - Headings should not end in ':' or '!'
Correct: Meeting location
Incorrect: Meeting location:
Correct: Note
Incorrect: Note! - One space (only) at the end of a sentence.
- Numbers up to nine should be written as text. Larger numbers should be written numerically.
- Phone number format
(03) 5327 9363 (note spacing). Phone numbers should not break over two lines.
If content is directed at an international audience, use the format +61 3 5327 9363. If content is directed at a Victorian audience remove (03).
Images can add to the visual appeal of a web page. However, images also add to the size (and hence load time) of a page and can push valuable content out of sight for readers.
If used they should be sharp and of good quality. To ensure a professional appearance clip art images should not be used.
Please note that text within graphics (such as a diagram or graphically presented table) is not indexed by the site's search engine and hence will not be found through a site search. It is good practice to use images that contain no text; we need to consider that the person viewing the web page may be using a mobile device so will be unable to read the text on a small screen.
Recommended sizes
Images should be resized to the appropriate dimensions before being brought into the CMS.
Types of image
Informative
If the image presents information to the site visitor that is not available anywhere else on the page it is considered to be informative and must have appropriate HTML 'alt text' that adequately conveys the purpose and function of the image. We must consider whether the person accessing the page is missing out on information if they cannot see the image, and provide an alternative means of conveying the message.
Decorative
Images that do not present any new information to the site visitor, and whose only function is to add visual appeal to the page are considered to be decorative. Decorative images do not require 'alt text'. They should be aligned to the right of the page.
Sensory
Images of art work and sculptures are examples of sensory images. HTML 'alt text' must be provided which describes the item, names the creator/artist and year of creation.
Editorial responsibility for content
Site owners are responsible for the accuracy and currency of all material published within their respective domains. The Web Management and Publishing Procedure outlines the responsibilities of the site owner in full.
Creation and maintenance of content
Nominated content coordinators across the University are responsible for the creation and maintenance of content within their respective areas. The corporate web team provides training and support to content coordinators. Errors or issues on a web page should be reported to the content coordinator, whose name appears at the bottom of the page.
Nominated content publishers may have access to edit individual or multiple pages. In principle, publishers should liaise with their respective content coordinator in the first instance with regards to web content issues.
The Web Management and Publishing Procedure outlines the responsibilities of content coordinators and publishers in full.
Monsido is a web governance platform that both assists in ensuring the quality of your website, and in avoiding bad user experiences caused by broken links, misspellings and inaccurate content.
Federation University web publishers and content coordinators can have access to Monsido for the web area that they are responsible for, receiving regular reports and access to the service. Locating broken links and misspellings on your web pages is easy using the Monsido Chrome Extension.
Contemporary usage means that full stops are no longer necessary after abbreviations, acronyms or contractions.
Abbreviations
Abbreviations are formed by omitting letters from the end of a word. Full stops and other punctuation marks are not used in most abbreviations but are still preferred in shortened Latin words:
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ACT, NSW, NT, Qld, SA, Tas, Vic, WA for the states/territories of Australia | Vic. Tas. W.A. |
Assoc Prof | Ass Prof, A/Prof, Ass/Prof, Assoc. Prof. |
Cwlth | C'wlth |
etc | etc, |
Acronyms
Acronyms are formed from the initial letters of words (whether the result is pronounceable as a word or as a series of letters). Full stops are not necessary between initials.
Write the name in full first with the acronym in brackets after. The acronym can then be used in the content.
eg Centre for eResearch and Digital Innovation (CeRDI)
CeRDI staff were honoured with an award...
Contractions
Contractions are formed by omitting letters from the middle of a word. Full stops are not necessary.
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Cwlth | C'wlth |
Pty Ltd | Pty. Ltd. |
Dr | Dr. |
Symbols
Do not use @ in place of 'at' unless it refers to a unit price or within an electronic address.
Avoid using ampersands (&) in body text (unless it is within a specific title name). Use 'and' instead.
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Students at Federation University | Students @ Federation uni |
Students and staff | Students & staff |
Campuses
When referring to a specific campus a capital 'C' should be used. When referring to more than one campus, use the lower case 'c'.
Do not refer to campuses by their street names (with the exceptions of Camp Street and Gillies Street campuses).
Our campuses
- Camp Street Campus
- Berwick Campus
- Gillies Street Campus
- Gippsland Campus (not Churchill)
- Mt Helen Campus
- SMB Campus
- Wimmera Campus (not Horsham)
Areas our campuses are located
- Ballarat (Mt Helen, SMB)
- Gippsland
- Wimmera
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Federation University Australia | Fed (Can only be used as a graphic element, not in text) |
Federation University | FU, FUA |
Federation (subsequent references) | FedUni |
Federation TAFE | FedUni TAFE |
#feduni (social media only) |
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Associate Professor, Assoc Prof | Assoc Prof Ass Prof, A/Prof, Ass/Prof, Assoc. Prof. |
Vice-Chancellor | Vice Chancellor |
Dr | Dr. |
To assist readability, headings need to follow a structured hierarchy, with a clear distinction between heading sizes. Headings should be descriptive so they provide the reader with a suggestion of what will follow, allowing scan-reading. Headings should be aligned to the left.
Our headings should be written in Sentence case - only the first word and proper nouns have initial capitals.
Headings should not:
- be questions
- end in a full stop or colon
- be hyperlinks
- be written in all capitals
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Federation Business School information session | Federation Business School Information Session |
Course fees and charges | Course Fees and Charges |
Formal titles and proper nouns should be written with a capital letter at the start of each word.
Terms often incorrectly capitalised: international, staff, students, bachelor's degree, higher education, lecturer, teacher
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We have many international students. | We have many International Students. |
Our students and staff have access to many facilities. | Our Students and Staff have access to many facilities. |
Only higher education students are eligible. | Only Higher Education students are eligible. |
He is a lecturer in mathematics. | He is a Lecturer in Mathematics. |
Our academic staff have profile pages on the web. | Our Academic Staff have profile pages on the web. |
Our style is to use minimal punctuation. That means removing unnecessary punctuation, as long as it doesn’t change your meaning.
Apostrophes
Apostrophes indicate contractions or possessives.
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She's not in class today. | Shes not in class today. |
The library's opening hours have changed. | The librarys opening hours have changed. |
Apostrophes are not used to indicate plurals, except when abbreviations or letters are used as nouns.
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The library now has hundreds of new videos and DVDs available for loan. | The library now has hundred's of new video's and DVD's available for loan. |
I gave them four A's and six B's. | I gave them four as and six bs. |
Colons and semicolons
Colons are used after a statement that introduces a list, a quotation or an example.
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Federation has campuses in three regional areas: Ballarat, Gippsland, and the Wimmera. | Federation has campuses in three regional areas, Ballarat, Gippsland and the Wimmera. |
Semicolons link two related but independent clauses. Both halves of the sentence must make sense on their own. If they don’t, don’t use a semicolon.
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Summer is bushfire season; be very careful when using naked flames. | Summer is bushfire season; hot and dry. |
Semicolons are also used to separate items in a list if commas would make it confusing, for example, when one or more items in the list need their own commas for clarity.
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The prize winners were Selma Lee, Ballarat; Peter Campbell, Churchill; and Dac Nguyen, Berwick. | The prize winners were Selma Lee, Ballarat, Peter Campbell, Churchill, and Dac Nguyen, Berwick. |
Note that there is a semicolon before the last item in the list.
Commas
Commas are used to separate clauses in a sentence, or items within a list. Our style is to not use a comma before the final item of a list, unless it is needed for clarity.
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She took a photograph of her parents, the king, and the queen. [The photograph was of four people.] | She took a photograph of her parents, the king and the queen. [The photograph was of two people: her parents who are also the king and queen.] |
Hyphens and dashes
Hyphens, en dashes and em dashes all have different uses.
Hyphens are used to join two words that work together to make an adjective, or where a prefix makes a word confusing.
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We are all ready for a well-earned break. | We are all ready for a well earned break. |
Please tell us if you have any pre-existing injuries. | Please tell us if you have any pre existing injuries. |
En dashes (–) with a space on either side isolate an explanation or phrase within a sentence. Our style is to use spaced en dashes.
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The library – like all shared spaces – should be a comfortable and pleasant place for everyone to work in. | The library - like all shared spaces - should be a comfortable and pleasant place for everyone to work in. |
Em dashes (—) are used to signal an abrupt interruption. They are rarely used outside fiction writing.
Quotations
Our style is to use single quotation marks (‘ ’), not double (“ ”). Use quotation marks for:
- direct quotes
- the titles of lectures, speeches, conferences and songs
- the titles of chapters or articles in books or other publications (but not the publication title)
- the first mention of an unfamiliar term, before you define it
- words used in an unusual way, or colloquial terms.
For quotes within quotes, use double quotations marks.
Spacing
Only one space is needed after full stops, commas, colons and semicolons.
Academic degrees are lowercase when spelled out:
- bachelor's degree
- science degree
- master's degree
- doctoral degree
- doctorate
*Note the plural form: bachelor's degrees; master's degrees; doctoral degrees.
Capitalise Federation degrees when referring to them by their proper name:
- Bachelor of Science
Names of majors, minors, concentrations, and programs are written in lowercase within text.
We use Australian spelling, which is often different to American or British. Some common examples are listed here, but if you are unsure check the Macquarie Dictionary.
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~ise
| ~ize
|
~yse
| ~yze
|
~our
| ~or
|
~re
| ~er
|
~ement
| ~ment
|
Use your spell-check.
Tip: You may need to set the language in Microsoft Word to English (Australian) to stop it automatically changing your words to US spelling.
If you are referring to a specific organisation or publication, or using a direct quote, always use the original spelling.
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World Health Organization | World Health Organisation |
In general, spell numbers up to nine and use numerals for numbers 10 and above. Exceptions to this include:
- references to headings or expressions from elsewhere that use numerals, for example, ‘chapter 5’, ‘appendix 2’, ‘Year 12’, ‘semester 1’
- text that is largely statistical or mathematical in nature, for example in a table, in which case the reader is aided by consistent use of numerals
- numbers accompanied by symbols or measurements, for example, ‘8°C’, ‘3 km’, ‘10 am’
- the beginning of sentences, where numbers should always be expressed in words.
Dates and times
Dates are written with no punctuation. Don't use 'th' or 'nd' etc after numbers.
Times are written with full stops, not colons, and a space before 'am' or 'pm'.
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22 October 2018 | 22nd October 2018, 22nd October 2018 |
22 Oct 2018 | October 22nd, 18 |
5.20 pm | 5.20PM |
11 pm |
It is acceptable to abbreviate months and days to three characters
Eg Apr, Sep, Wed, Fri
Telephone
To make them easier to read, telephone numbers should be broken into chunks. They should not break over two lines
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(03) 5327 9363 | 53279363 |
0353279363 | |
5327 9363 |
If content is directed at an international audience the format should be +613 5327 9363.
If the items in your list are complete sentences, start each one with a capital letter and finish each with a full stop.
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There are two distinct cultural protocols:
| There are two distinct cultural protocols:
|
If the items in your list are not complete sentences, start each item with a lower-case letter. Don’t use commas or semicolons at the end of each item. Don’t use ‘and’ on the second-last item. Do use a full stop after the final item.
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The Welcome to Country always occurs at the start of an event. Such events include but are not limited to:
| The Welcome to Country always occurs at the start of an event. Such events include but are not limited to
|
All items in a list must follow the same grammatical structure. You can check this by reading the introductory phrase and then each item to see if it makes sense.
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Successful students:
| Successful students are:
|
Images can add to the visual appeal of a web page. However, images also add to the size (and hence load time) of a page and can push valuable content out of sight for readers. If used they should be sharp and of good quality. To ensure a professional appearance clip art images should not be used.
Text within graphics (such as a diagram or graphically presented table) is not indexed by the site's search engine and hence will not be found through a site search. Good practice is to use images that contain no text; consider that the person viewing the web page may be using a mobile device so will be unable to read the text on a small screen.
Types of image
Informative
If the image presents information to the site visitor that is not available anywhere else on the page it is considered to be informative and must have appropriate HTML 'alt text' that adequately conveys the purpose and function of the image. We must consider whether the person accessing the page is missing out on information if they cannot see the image, and provide an alternative means of conveying the message.
Decorative
Images that do not present any new information to the site visitor, and whose only function is to add visual appeal to the page are considered to be decorative. Decorative images do not require 'alt text'. They should be aligned to the right of the page.
Sensory
Images of art work and sculptures are examples of sensory images. HTML 'alt text' must be provided which describes the item, names the creator/artist and year of creation.
- Professional but conversational
- Positive but not over-stated
- Relaxed and friendly but not too familiar
- We keep language simple and clear
- We use short, focused sentences without undue embellishment
- We don't use nicknames, slang or emoticons
- We are clear and concise
- We don’t SHOUT at our reader
- We speak in the first (we, us, our/s) and second (you, your/yours) person
- We value and respect our reader – they are our focus
- Our language is ‘inclusive’ – avoiding biased or prejudicial terms
Plain language
We use plain language, which is
- Faster to read
- Easier to understand
- Preferred by a wide range of readers
Plain language uses:
- familiar, everyday words
- strong verbs in an active voice
- simple sentence framework, with shorter sentences
- headings, bullet points and other formatting techniques to make it easy to scan a document and find key information
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We aim to provide a teaching environment that inspires our students to succeed. | Our purpose is to provide a quality tertiary education experience that inspires our students to succeed. |
We care about our staff and students. | Federation University Australia is a people-focused institution |
To enter the program you must hold a degree or diploma. | Entry into the program requires that you have previously completed a Degree or Diploma. |
After completing this program you’ll have many career opportunities. | Completion of this program will provide you with a variety of career opportunities. |
Apply by 1 September. | Applications close 1 September. |